i don't want you like that
masked as another
i want you pure , free
irreducible you
when i call you
among all people of the world
only you will be you
since centuries
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chained to the roots
of these empty traditions
time and again
you were sacrificed
for being
a mother
a sister
a wife
a lover
for long
you have endured
in silence
for long
you had misery
pain
and tears for company
be a rebel
open the braids of your hair
rip apart the veil
that clothe you
from yourself
come out of the garment
woven by men
stay naked
in your happiness
you are a woman!!!
the powerful metaphor of my poems
you belong to the wild
where no force on earth can tame you
you are a wild flower
go..breathe in the wilderness
go..dance in the wilderness :) ;)
25 comments:
Powerful!I liked it.
-Portia
Well done! Very poignant
A fabulous poem, glad you started writing again.
What a nicely penned piece. A man awakening women to the power within. To shed all social shackles. To Be, Her.
Beautiful...
I salute your talent
well done my friend well done
Very well written :)
good one buddy! But I would suggest to take out the dots, although by using them you wanted to convey your feelings. Sometimes words are not enough to express one's feelings but they are definitely more powerful than dots.
" dance in the wilderness " it's lovely because of its simplicity and the depth inherent in that simplicity. Beautiful.
Very strong and heartfelt.
Beautifully spelt!
Deep thoughts and lovely words...
Very powerful and poignant. I love women-centric poems very much. Also, I loved the words you chose to create the image. Very well written :)
Awesomely written! Very strong and uplifting :)
A big WOW! for this amazing composition.
Powerful expressions.
Though you compose rare yet you write in such a way that people won't forget them for a long long time.
Happy writing, Rigzin :)
My best wishes.
What beautiful words! Loved the lines "the powerful metaphor of my poem! Nicely done Rigzin!
Such a powerful poem! It reminded me of one of my favourite quotes from one of my favourite shows ever!
"You're a wild flower.
Wild flowers... they grow on the desert. The most horrible place on the planet, because they save their strenght and they wait for the rain to come, and they reach for the sun and they bloom.
And that's what you're gonna do, you're gonna bloom"
Loved it...:)
Simply superb dude!
The sad fact is that most of the time, it is women who are women's worst enemy. There is hardly any support for women from within their quarters, be it family, society, the workplace.. Many a times, women who have themselves been suppressed, do not like to see other women rise. Such mindsets have to change. In a country where literacy is low and education is lower, you can't expect the menfolk to respect women when women themselves don't respect each other.
Well written.
Cheers
CRD
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Amazing!
Love you poetry. So very powerful that it touches you very deep inside. Thanks Rigzin for sharing this. Sorry for the delay
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Such a moving poem. 'Loved it' would be an understatement.
Wildflower and a women??? Good God!!! The strong and uplifting one.. Hats off!! Though you described her as what the world have but gave the end with encouragement to be like a wildflower to fight with the world.. And be free, pure cause she belongs to the wild.. Grrrreattttt!!! 👌
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