Monday 23 August 2010

..auburn beauty.. :) ;)

..there lives a girl who's sugar n sweet..
..it was destiny that made us meet...
..armed with a cannon..this ' pretty ' software engineer '...
..is all set to conquer the world n domineer..
..' a magic sorrounds this girl '..i saw a truth fairy declare..
..so in my poem..i try bring her pure naked soul to bare..
..she's courageous,dauntless,gritty n ' brave '..
..all these qualities in her..is what i rave...
..one look at her will take you on a flight to heaven..
..thats the magic of this ' dusky ' raven...
..hates people who do fag n smoke..
..is tht why??? infront of her sinners like me tremble n choke...
..she doesn't believe in the word ' impossible '...
..because anything for her is achievable..
..loves readin the world of angels n demons..
..then into her own little world she crayons...
..Oh!!!..her beauty..every poet does crave...
..this ' nymph ' can make any poet her slave..
..her pictures  are poetry spillin from every frame..
..thats the unseen talent of this ' brunette dame '...
.. a poem of ' emotions ' surging ahead like a stream..
..these  images come alive..talk,romance,orate,cry n scream..
..her camera goes click,click,click..showin u her creative prowess..
..thats the  fictive  power of this auburn duchess...
..though miles seperate us..one thing keeps us glued..
..its our love for one common thing..that is food...
..i saw a canary flying by..as it cooingly sang...
..that ' her,me n maggie  do make a perfect gang '..
..if God asked me for a ' wish ' that i could transgress....
..it would be gettin drunk in the beauty of this brown sorceress ..
..I  would be willing to be in His slender chains...
..if in the labyrinths..with my ' gang ' i was to forever detain... :) ;)

28 comments:

  1. speechless..........

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  2. WOW!!!
    its amazing
    again a masterpiece

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  3. @tash..
    ..thank u gal frm selangor.. :) ;)

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  4. nice placement of words .. it's unique and what can I say ... again agreed that this is a masterpiece.

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  5. @Iskander..
    ..thank u sir fr ur encouragin comment..

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  6. Took me time to read the whole article, the article is great but the comments bring more brainstorm ideas, thanks.

    - Johnson

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  7. ...lovely words..finds..a place like heaven abode..what a complete solace i get whenever I m in ur poem...its here ...its here ...if someone expects a special kind of masterpiece that even TOLSTOY N GEORGE BERNARD SHAW..WELCOMES...

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  8. ...der was a bit of exaggeration in ur comment..hahaha!!!..
    ..but i admire dat compliment..thanks fr droppin by.... :) ;)

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  9. another masterpiece...:)

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  10. masterpiece...:)

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  11. @johnson..
    ..i agree with u...d comments brings out more ideas..even if der is criticism in a comment i welcome it...as it helps us in correcting our errors....
    ...thanks fr dropping by...

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  12. anonymous was me onli....
    sorry....:)

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  13. no othr poetry could ve better described her d way u did... n dat too in few months... amazing:) keep writing :)

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  15. @selena..

    ..thanks selena..
    ..i wud try to come up wid more..
    ..just keep dropping comments..
    ..it is very encouraging... :) ;)

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  16. Yo!gal this is just truly awesome. I loved it...

    Love
    Mani

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