..i was caught unaware.....was too timid but for her did i gulp the fear..
..when she spoke i quivered...
...my body went numb as i shivered..
..but still i gathered courage and dared..
..because i wanted her to know how much i cared..
..her words that showered with care...
..i felt ' special ' for the secrets she did share..
..when she spoke about her past...
..my heart started beating very fast..
..as time went by it started to unfold..
..she was the 'one' with a heart of gold..
..for her i was ready to face the guillotine..
..endure whatever even if my heart did whine...
..though i knew i was nothing less than a swine..
..in her i started seeing the shades of my ' valentine '..
..my past relationships have been a sham..
..don't want this ' special ' one to slam..
..that is why we are the best of friends..
..i will let her know when my search ends...
..until that moment in the darkness do i grope..
..what keeps me going is a mirage called hope ..
..i ask myself..is this beginning of something to bloom..
..see the clouds clearing n the death of gloom..
..but i ll always live with one biggest regret..
..that is the sin i committed of making her wait.. :(
34 comments:
beautifully written.... heya wat abt d sketches? ve u done it urself?
beautiful.
u write wonderful
..thank u angmo fr ur comments.. ;)
chok000
gud one ...
Absence makes the heart grow fonder.
shakespeare reinvented! wow!!!
..very well said 'singay saab'...
..it was a nice one.. ;)
..shekespeare..dats too hard to digest man..
..he's a giant..while am still a peanut..in d early stages of infancy...
..he's d big fat goliath of english lit..ders nt even an iota of him in me..hehehe ;)
..anyways..thnks fr ur comment.. :) ;)
is the silver linin still lingerin on da clouds????????????
hmmmmm must admit da poetism of da poetic soul dat poem'd it out!!!!!!
one thing... clear cur 4om ur poem... u r damn gud in stretchin ur vision far ahead! beyond any imagination... hehehehe
..dats y its said..d power of imagination makes us infinite..
..beyond 'infinity' if still der sumthin exists..it can take us der also...
..'seein d silver lining in d clouds' is d sign of optimism n positivity..its d sign of hope..dats wht drives d world..dats wht keeps ppl goin...hehehehe.. ;)
..wen we imagine things...'d world is our own oyster'...we r our own king..n we own our own kingdom...
..thank u fr ur comments..it was like a breeze of fresh air...
wow... u r territory-ing ur own kingdom far beyon da edge.... da silver linin is lined by ur positivity......
stretch it.... evn i wannna c da infinity dat lies beyond it...
..fr dat u wud ve to imagine ,imagine n imagine..
..den u can b d queen of ur virtual kingdom..and expand ur territory as far as u can..even upto infinity n beyond it also...
..day say..dat d sky is d limit..
..i say..its wrong..beyond dat exists ' worlds ' we ve never seen... ;)
now it occurs to me dat dreamin n visionin walks side by side..
sky aint da limit... its da penetrable wall of our imaginative journey.... i agree
..imagination helps us build dat bridge between d periphery of d limitless sky..to d borders of unknown worlds which we ve never seen..
..later imagination ll also help u to penetrate d amber walls of dat godlike celestial worlds.. ;)
dats shows..d beauty of ur mind...luvly!!!..
..to write anythin u need an inspiration...
..my inspiration is tht 'gal' in d poem..hehehe ;)
..thanks fr ur comments..spalzes..
charming and magical
..thank u...thank u... ;)
huh..*sigh*...enchanting..
i hope such feelings really exists....it seems imaginary....cuz world hs bcm soooo fake nd cosmetic
..i kno amandeep..out here everyone is a part of great rat race...everythin out here is a sham n bogus...
..but des feelings did exist on dat particular day..hehehehe :)
..dis did exist dat particular moment..
..so tried capturin it in dis poem..
..thanks fr ur comment.. ;)
wooaaahhh..o.O
gr8!!! if dey really existed den its too gud!!!
..danke danke..meanin thank u thank u..amandeep... :)
nice one!
@eatpraylovemovies..
..thanks fr dropping by... :)
such an awsome one bro...really didn't knew earlier that u r such a gud writer...really lyk...keep writing bro...gudluk!!
@fida..
..thanks bro fr d encouragement..
..i sure wud keep writing n try to come up wid more..
...thanks again fr dropping by.. :)
sweet of u to write your feelings, beautiful
nice and fluid, just like your feelings for 'her'. All th' best!
-Portia
Very beautiful your write wonderful.....
Very beautifully written :)
Another lovely one.
lovely:)
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