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...who is a POET??...he is...but a dethroned king sitting among the ashes of his palace trying to fashion an image out of the ashes...
..he is the poorest of the poor..yet he carries an oasis in his heart cultivated by the caravan of his thinking...he is a pauper..but he still pretends to be a ' prince ' in the kingdom of his vivid imagination..
..he only sings when he is starving for he cannot sing if his mouth be filled with food...
..he only raises his hand to beg for he cannot raise his hands if it be filled with gold...
..his wealth is his winged imagination and fictive power to think...and ' thinking ' always acts for him as the stumbling stone to ' poetry '... :) ;)
..he is a tree watered by the river of beautiful thoughts..and carries in his heart a lamp unconquered by darkness..
..yes..he seeks NIRVANA..not by counting coins of gold..but in leading his sheep to greener pasture..in seeking a smile from humanity...in putting his child to sleep..and in writing the last line of his poem... :)

...he will be unheard until humans honor the dead and forget the living..for then only upon his ' death '... ' he ' will rule their hearts...and his kingdom will have no ending... :) :) ;)
..TO HAVE GREAT POETS..THERE MUST BE GREAT AUDIENCES TOO... :)

Sunday 14 March 2010

...'special'...

..i was caught unaware...
..was too timid but for her did i gulp the fear..
..when she spoke i quivered...
...my body went numb as i shivered..
..but still i gathered courage and dared..
..because i wanted her to know how much i cared..
..her words that showered with care...
..i felt ' special ' for the secrets she did share..
..when she spoke about her past...
..my heart started beating very fast..
..as time went by it started to unfold..
..she was the 'one' with a heart of gold..
..for her i was ready to face the guillotine..
..endure whatever even if my heart did whine...
..though i knew i was nothing less than a swine..
..in her i started seeing the shades of my ' valentine '..
 ..my past relationships have been a sham..
 ..don't want this ' special  ' one to slam..
 ..that is why we are the best of friends..
 ..i will let her know when my search ends...
..until that moment in the darkness do i grope..
..what keeps me going is a mirage called hope ..
..i ask myself..is this beginning of something to bloom..
 ..see the clouds clearing n the death of gloom..
  ..but i ll always live with one biggest regret..
 ..that is the sin i committed of making her wait.. :(
                                                                          

34 comments:

hazel said...

beautifully written.... heya wat abt d sketches? ve u done it urself?

angmo said...

beautiful.
u write wonderful

Rigzin Namgyal said...

..thank u angmo fr ur comments.. ;)

singay's blog said...

chok000

singay's blog said...

gud one ...

singay's blog said...

Absence makes the heart grow fonder.

Unknown said...

shakespeare reinvented! wow!!!

Rigzin Namgyal said...

..very well said 'singay saab'...
..it was a nice one.. ;)

Rigzin Namgyal said...

..shekespeare..dats too hard to digest man..
..he's a giant..while am still a peanut..in d early stages of infancy...
..he's d big fat goliath of english lit..ders nt even an iota of him in me..hehehe ;)
..anyways..thnks fr ur comment.. :) ;)

T@shy said...

is the silver linin still lingerin on da clouds????????????
hmmmmm must admit da poetism of da poetic soul dat poem'd it out!!!!!!

one thing... clear cur 4om ur poem... u r damn gud in stretchin ur vision far ahead! beyond any imagination... hehehehe

Rigzin Namgyal said...

..dats y its said..d power of imagination makes us infinite..
..beyond 'infinity' if still der sumthin exists..it can take us der also...

..'seein d silver lining in d clouds' is d sign of optimism n positivity..its d sign of hope..dats wht drives d world..dats wht keeps ppl goin...hehehehe.. ;)

..wen we imagine things...'d world is our own oyster'...we r our own king..n we own our own kingdom...
..thank u fr ur comments..it was like a breeze of fresh air...

T@shy said...

wow... u r territory-ing ur own kingdom far beyon da edge.... da silver linin is lined by ur positivity......

stretch it.... evn i wannna c da infinity dat lies beyond it...

Rigzin Namgyal said...

..fr dat u wud ve to imagine ,imagine n imagine..
..den u can b d queen of ur virtual kingdom..and expand ur territory as far as u can..even upto infinity n beyond it also...
..day say..dat d sky is d limit..
..i say..its wrong..beyond dat exists ' worlds ' we ve never seen... ;)

T@shy said...

now it occurs to me dat dreamin n visionin walks side by side..
sky aint da limit... its da penetrable wall of our imaginative journey.... i agree

Rigzin Namgyal said...

..imagination helps us build dat bridge between d periphery of d limitless sky..to d borders of unknown worlds which we ve never seen..
..later imagination ll also help u to penetrate d amber walls of dat godlike celestial worlds.. ;)

skarma spalzes said...

dats shows..d beauty of ur mind...luvly!!!..

Rigzin Namgyal said...

..to write anythin u need an inspiration...
..my inspiration is tht 'gal' in d poem..hehehe ;)
..thanks fr ur comments..spalzes..

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dechen said...

charming and magical

Rigzin Namgyal said...

..thank u...thank u... ;)

aman said...

huh..*sigh*...enchanting..
i hope such feelings really exists....it seems imaginary....cuz world hs bcm soooo fake nd cosmetic

Rigzin Namgyal said...

..i kno amandeep..out here everyone is a part of great rat race...everythin out here is a sham n bogus...
..but des feelings did exist on dat particular day..hehehehe :)
..dis did exist dat particular moment..
..so tried capturin it in dis poem..
..thanks fr ur comment.. ;)

aman said...

wooaaahhh..o.O
gr8!!! if dey really existed den its too gud!!!

Rigzin Namgyal said...

..danke danke..meanin thank u thank u..amandeep... :)

eatpraylovemovies said...

nice one!

Rigzin Namgyal said...

@eatpraylovemovies..
..thanks fr dropping by... :)

fida faid said...

such an awsome one bro...really didn't knew earlier that u r such a gud writer...really lyk...keep writing bro...gudluk!!

Rigzin Namgyal said...

@fida..

..thanks bro fr d encouragement..
..i sure wud keep writing n try to come up wid more..
...thanks again fr dropping by.. :)

Amelia said...

sweet of u to write your feelings, beautiful

Anonymous said...

nice and fluid, just like your feelings for 'her'. All th' best!
-Portia

Unknown said...

Very beautiful your write wonderful.....

Dipanwita Chakraborty said...

Very beautifully written :)

Unknown said...

Another lovely one.

Fabrice d'Mont said...

lovely:)