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...who is a POET??...he is...but a dethroned king sitting among the ashes of his palace trying to fashion an image out of the ashes...
..he is the poorest of the poor..yet he carries an oasis in his heart cultivated by the caravan of his thinking...he is a pauper..but he still pretends to be a ' prince ' in the kingdom of his vivid imagination..
..he only sings when he is starving for he cannot sing if his mouth be filled with food...
..he only raises his hand to beg for he cannot raise his hands if it be filled with gold...
..his wealth is his winged imagination and fictive power to think...and ' thinking ' always acts for him as the stumbling stone to ' poetry '... :) ;)
..he is a tree watered by the river of beautiful thoughts..and carries in his heart a lamp unconquered by darkness..
..yes..he seeks NIRVANA..not by counting coins of gold..but in leading his sheep to greener pasture..in seeking a smile from humanity...in putting his child to sleep..and in writing the last line of his poem... :)

...he will be unheard until humans honor the dead and forget the living..for then only upon his ' death '... ' he ' will rule their hearts...and his kingdom will have no ending... :) :) ;)
..TO HAVE GREAT POETS..THERE MUST BE GREAT AUDIENCES TOO... :)

Monday 23 August 2010

..auburn beauty.. :) ;)

..there lives a girl who's sugar n sweet..
..it was destiny that made us meet...
..armed with a cannon..this ' pretty ' software engineer '...
..is all set to conquer the world n domineer..
..' a magic sorrounds this girl '..i saw a truth fairy declare..
..so in my poem..i try bring her pure naked soul to bare..
..she's courageous,dauntless,gritty n ' brave '..
..all these qualities in her..is what i rave...
..one look at her will take you on a flight to heaven..
..thats the magic of this ' dusky ' raven...
..hates people who do fag n smoke..
..is tht why??? infront of her sinners like me tremble n choke...
..she doesn't believe in the word ' impossible '...
..because anything for her is achievable..
..loves readin the world of angels n demons..
..then into her own little world she crayons...
..Oh!!!..her beauty..every poet does crave...
..this ' nymph ' can make any poet her slave..
..her pictures  are poetry spillin from every frame..
..thats the unseen talent of this ' brunette dame '...
.. a poem of ' emotions ' surging ahead like a stream..
..these  images come alive..talk,romance,orate,cry n scream..
..her camera goes click,click,click..showin u her creative prowess..
..thats the  fictive  power of this auburn duchess...
..though miles seperate us..one thing keeps us glued..
..its our love for one common thing..that is food...
..i saw a canary flying by..as it cooingly sang...
..that ' her,me n maggie  do make a perfect gang '..
..if God asked me for a ' wish ' that i could transgress....
..it would be gettin drunk in the beauty of this brown sorceress ..
..I  would be willing to be in His slender chains...
..if in the labyrinths..with my ' gang ' i was to forever detain... :) ;)

28 comments:

aman said...

speechless..........

dechen said...

WOW!!!
its amazing
again a masterpiece

Rigzin Namgyal said...

@aman n dechen..
..thanks...

T@shy said...

commendable!!

Rigzin Namgyal said...

@tash..
..thank u gal frm selangor.. :) ;)

Iskandar Hussein said...

nice placement of words .. it's unique and what can I say ... again agreed that this is a masterpiece.

Rigzin Namgyal said...

@Iskander..
..thank u sir fr ur encouragin comment..

angmo said...

beautifully written

Rigzin Namgyal said...

@angmo..
..thanks angmo...

Anonymous said...

Took me time to read the whole article, the article is great but the comments bring more brainstorm ideas, thanks.

- Johnson

bale rambo said...

...lovely words..finds..a place like heaven abode..what a complete solace i get whenever I m in ur poem...its here ...its here ...if someone expects a special kind of masterpiece that even TOLSTOY N GEORGE BERNARD SHAW..WELCOMES...

Rigzin Namgyal said...

...der was a bit of exaggeration in ur comment..hahaha!!!..
..but i admire dat compliment..thanks fr droppin by.... :) ;)

Anonymous said...

another masterpiece...:)

Anonymous said...

masterpiece...:)

Rigzin Namgyal said...

..thanks doc n 'anonymous '..

Rigzin Namgyal said...

@johnson..
..i agree with u...d comments brings out more ideas..even if der is criticism in a comment i welcome it...as it helps us in correcting our errors....
...thanks fr dropping by...

Anonymous said...

anonymous was me onli....
sorry....:)

Rigzin Namgyal said...

..its oke doc.... :)

AfricAsiaEuro said...

amazing, ... Art

Rigzin Namgyal said...

thanks Heinz.. :) ;)

Haibat said...

lovely poem and words.

Rigzin Namgyal said...

..thanks Haibat.. ;)

hazel said...

no othr poetry could ve better described her d way u did... n dat too in few months... amazing:) keep writing :)

Rigzin Namgyal said...
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Selena Gomez said...

I really like this

Rigzin Namgyal said...

@selena..

..thanks selena..
..i wud try to come up wid more..
..just keep dropping comments..
..it is very encouraging... :) ;)

Manisha Bhatia said...

Yo!gal this is just truly awesome. I loved it...

Love
Mani

Unknown said...

Another wonder