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...who is a POET??...he is...but a dethroned king sitting among the ashes of his palace trying to fashion an image out of the ashes...
..he is the poorest of the poor..yet he carries an oasis in his heart cultivated by the caravan of his thinking...he is a pauper..but he still pretends to be a ' prince ' in the kingdom of his vivid imagination..
..he only sings when he is starving for he cannot sing if his mouth be filled with food...
..he only raises his hand to beg for he cannot raise his hands if it be filled with gold...
..his wealth is his winged imagination and fictive power to think...and ' thinking ' always acts for him as the stumbling stone to ' poetry '... :) ;)
..he is a tree watered by the river of beautiful thoughts..and carries in his heart a lamp unconquered by darkness..
..yes..he seeks NIRVANA..not by counting coins of gold..but in leading his sheep to greener pasture..in seeking a smile from humanity...in putting his child to sleep..and in writing the last line of his poem... :)

...he will be unheard until humans honor the dead and forget the living..for then only upon his ' death '... ' he ' will rule their hearts...and his kingdom will have no ending... :) :) ;)
..TO HAVE GREAT POETS..THERE MUST BE GREAT AUDIENCES TOO... :)

Saturday, 30 March 2013

...your smile.. :)


O breathe a word
 or two of fire
smile as if those words
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seeing your smile..
the seas caught fire.
fishes started flying..
this planet ripped open....
and the moon emerged..
from the chest of the earth....
hundreds of madmen..
danced at this glorious sight..
seeing your smile..
poetry rose to its epitome.
it gained further heights..
as your smile got wider...
thousands of adages became meaningless..
for words escaped from languages..
and burned at the altar of your smile..
seeing your smile..
hundreds of dervishes began to dance..
not knowing what they were dancing about..
but just because you cared to smile..
Sages finally attained their spiritual liberation..
and the whirl of the Sufi's became more menacing..
for madness radiated from the skin of your smile..
seeing your smile..
the might of one thousand armies was destroyed..
and the cavalry of one thousand cannons silenced..
the roar of one thousand lions subdued...
and the glory of the ancient kings reduced to rubble..
for the arrows of your smile vandalized everything on its way..
seeing your smile..
a spirit entered inside this poet to flesh these lines..
for these lines ran like blood in his body..
and he found the key to the secret of all languages..
that he had always wanted to unlock..
and unleash the poem of his poems..
but in your smile..
also lay hidden the last line of this poem..
now that you don't seem to smile..
this poem will forever remain unfinished.
and this poem..like this unknown poet..
will decay in obscurity.. :( :(

106 comments:

Sri Valli said...

Oh! suddenly the poem went a bit sad in the last lines....But, loved the transition, wish that person smiles again and reveal those hidden words!

sulekkha said...

A deep poem with an interesting and unexpected end.Loved the last two lines.

sulekkha said...

A deep poem with an interesting and unexpected end.Loved the last two lines.

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Morgan Dragonwillow said...

The poem shows a lot of passion and creativity. Great job.

Simran said...

Such a cute creation... Last few lines so touching!
Liked the sketch too! :)

Keep Smiling dear!

desert rose said...

Such a nice poem...wish it ended on a happy note...but some things in life turn out to be better if you let it remain unfinished just like your poem... keep writing

Rajeev Raushan said...

uffff it's amazing man... I got immersed in your line, while you'r admiring someone's smile... (Y)

Jyoti Mishra said...

seeing your smile..
..the might of one thousand armies was destroyed..
..and the cavalry of one thousand cannons silenced..

loved this bit..
and then how it turned out in the end..
one thing which is prominent in your write ups is the flow u maintain throughout :)
like reading a song !!

Ron said...

Rigzin,

I LOVE this poem. So visual...so expressive and a thousand feelings/emotions wrapped into an instant. The richness of absorbing the smile and the angst of an unfinished poetic sonata. Brilliantly done!

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A guy who fall in love with a smile would have a heart of gold. A smile that may not be perfect or enchanting for everyone else, but for him a pure delight.
This poem will surely put that gone smile back on her lips :) Keep writing Rigs, This is your wand of magic.

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I wonder why u ended it on such a low note? A poet's imagination has its own highs and lows i suppose..and thats the beauty of it. :)

PORTIA said...

wonderful poem! For me, both 'that' smile and the poet's intended lines have frozen into pearls of love.

-Portia

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this poem is epic, rigzin! your amazing poetry was surely missed! so wonderful that you posted again! i hope you'll continue to post more! :-)

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