..while the world slept..
..the ground beneath her trembled...
..mothers,fathers n children wept..
..as everywhere lay the dead...
..palaces n houses reduced to rubble..
..after the earth shook for a few seconds...
..the injured trying to scramble...
..it's the nature's wrath that had beckoned...
..all along were lying a sea of corpses..
..piled up one upon the other...
..hoping against hopes...
..this time has united them together..
..in a country where poverty is an epidemic..
..which for centuries has remain enslaved...
...this calamity has made things pandemic..
..this day will forever remain engraved..
...its unthinkable to count the pain and the damage..
..shouts,screams n shrieks everywhere...
...we have to bring them out of this carnage...
..its time to show we care n wipe their tear.. :(
10 comments:
gud one!!!!
..thank u..dis is d least tht we cud have done..after wht happened der..
this one was really good
this one was really good
this one was really good
..feel sorry fr dos ppl who had to face dis natural disaster... :(
it seems like u felt their pain while writin dis... nice 1...
..yes maggie..i saw d havoc dat happened der in news..it was really heart wrenchin..but feel sorry tht we cudnt do anythin fr dem..
..i cud see ppl piling up corpses..n den ligthin dem on fire as if it is a bonfire..dat was very sad..but der was no way out..otherwise der was fear of an epidemic..feel very sorry fr those souls..
..may all of dem rest on peace..n in 'heaven' dey dwell forever...
its beautifully described...sad very sad,..but beautifully written...d pain is plain visible in dis poem of urs...
..yea..wht happened der was even worse den wht happened in leh..and of greater magnitude...
...tried to pay dem a tribute..
..danke fr ur comment..
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