..it was destiny that made us meet...
..armed with a cannon..this ' pretty ' software engineer '...
..is all set to conquer the world n domineer..
..' a magic sorrounds this girl '..i saw a truth fairy declare..
..so in my poem..i try bring her pure naked soul to bare..
..she's courageous,dauntless,gritty n ' brave '..
..all these qualities in her..is what i rave...
..one look at her will take you on a flight to heaven..
..thats the magic of this ' dusky ' raven...
..hates people who do fag n smoke..
..is tht why??? infront of her sinners like me tremble n choke...
..she doesn't believe in the word ' impossible '...
..because anything for her is achievable..
..loves readin the world of angels n demons..
..then into her own little world she crayons...
..Oh!!!..her beauty..every poet does crave...
..this ' nymph ' can make any poet her slave..
..her pictures are poetry spillin from every frame..
..thats the unseen talent of this ' brunette dame '...
.. a poem of ' emotions ' surging ahead like a stream..
..these images come alive..talk,romance,orate,cry n scream..
..her camera goes click,click,click..showin u her creative prowess..
..thats the fictive power of this auburn duchess...
..though miles seperate us..one thing keeps us glued..
..its our love for one common thing..that is food...
..i saw a canary flying by..as it cooingly sang...
..that ' her,me n maggie do make a perfect gang '..
..if God asked me for a ' wish ' that i could transgress....
..it would be gettin drunk in the beauty of this brown sorceress ..
..I would be willing to be in His slender chains...
..if in the labyrinths..with my ' gang ' i was to forever detain... :) ;)
28 comments:
speechless..........
WOW!!!
its amazing
again a masterpiece
@aman n dechen..
..thanks...
commendable!!
@tash..
..thank u gal frm selangor.. :) ;)
nice placement of words .. it's unique and what can I say ... again agreed that this is a masterpiece.
@Iskander..
..thank u sir fr ur encouragin comment..
beautifully written
@angmo..
..thanks angmo...
Took me time to read the whole article, the article is great but the comments bring more brainstorm ideas, thanks.
- Johnson
...lovely words..finds..a place like heaven abode..what a complete solace i get whenever I m in ur poem...its here ...its here ...if someone expects a special kind of masterpiece that even TOLSTOY N GEORGE BERNARD SHAW..WELCOMES...
...der was a bit of exaggeration in ur comment..hahaha!!!..
..but i admire dat compliment..thanks fr droppin by.... :) ;)
another masterpiece...:)
masterpiece...:)
..thanks doc n 'anonymous '..
@johnson..
..i agree with u...d comments brings out more ideas..even if der is criticism in a comment i welcome it...as it helps us in correcting our errors....
...thanks fr dropping by...
anonymous was me onli....
sorry....:)
..its oke doc.... :)
amazing, ... Art
thanks Heinz.. :) ;)
lovely poem and words.
..thanks Haibat.. ;)
no othr poetry could ve better described her d way u did... n dat too in few months... amazing:) keep writing :)
I really like this
@selena..
..thanks selena..
..i wud try to come up wid more..
..just keep dropping comments..
..it is very encouraging... :) ;)
Yo!gal this is just truly awesome. I loved it...
Love
Mani
Another wonder
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