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...who is a POET??...he is...but a dethroned king sitting among the ashes of his palace trying to fashion an image out of the ashes...
..he is the poorest of the poor..yet he carries an oasis in his heart cultivated by the caravan of his thinking...he is a pauper..but he still pretends to be a ' prince ' in the kingdom of his vivid imagination..
..he only sings when he is starving for he cannot sing if his mouth be filled with food...
..he only raises his hand to beg for he cannot raise his hands if it be filled with gold...
..his wealth is his winged imagination and fictive power to think...and ' thinking ' always acts for him as the stumbling stone to ' poetry '... :) ;)
..he is a tree watered by the river of beautiful thoughts..and carries in his heart a lamp unconquered by darkness..
..yes..he seeks NIRVANA..not by counting coins of gold..but in leading his sheep to greener pasture..in seeking a smile from humanity...in putting his child to sleep..and in writing the last line of his poem... :)

...he will be unheard until humans honor the dead and forget the living..for then only upon his ' death '... ' he ' will rule their hearts...and his kingdom will have no ending... :) :) ;)
..TO HAVE GREAT POETS..THERE MUST BE GREAT AUDIENCES TOO... :)

Monday, 12 September 2011

..an ode to my mother..

no painter's brush nor poet's pen
in justice to her fame 
has reached half high enough
to write a mother's name


 
for every moan that escaped you during my birth
every bit of my flesh i owe to you 'O Mother'
in great pain did you bear me for my existence
all my pain belittles in front of you ' O Mother '
when i feared tripping in the depths of darkness
you acted as my cane and embraced me with your light
when without a second you gave your life for mine
that very moment my heart belonged to you forever
i remember when my father punished me
it was always your love that stopped him
your heart was a deep abyss
at the bottom of which i always found forgiveness
you worked hard till your limbs did hurt
but never thought of blaming me for the pain
there was only one pretty child in the world
and in your eyes it was always me ' O Mother  '
your love for me knew no infinite
it could make the earth stop and heavens tremble
in the heavens above even the angels started crying
seeing the love so devotional like yours ' O Mother '
you were always my first love
and in my ' first love '  i found my liberation
great wars and battles were fought by warriors,kings and men
but the bravest battle that was ever fought
will not be found in the pages of history written by men
it was silently fought by you  ' O Mother '
we speak of diamonds and jewel
you were the jewel in my life that i will always treasure
we speak of pain and torture
the pain was the look in your eyes when i saw you the last time
the torture was in seeing tears fall
from the angelic eyes of my mother
kill me,skin me,peel me,punish me..do as you wish God
but never let tears fall from the beautiful eyes of my mother
your flesh still slumbers in me
and even now only after my eyes close..your heart sleeps
you share with me a ' bond ' that even the God's do envy
a bond that is so dear that only a mother can understand  :( :(

50 comments:

Rimly said...

What a beautiful poem for your mother. Loved it. You have expressed a mother's love for her child so beautifully.



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melissa said...

How lovely! I could sense your love for your mother with your deep sighs young one. You've discovered the strongest bond there is on earth between a mother and her child :)

JANU said...

This is so beautiful.

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Wow..that's an amazing write..:)

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Abhi said...

This is so amazing u describd..i felt d same while reading ur's "Mother's Poem"
there is a deep insight in ur poem..lovely poem Rigzin..keep it up!

Jyoti Mishra said...

awesome expressions n brilliant use of words.

Lovely read !!!!

Anonymous said...

Just beautiful. What love you have shown for your mother. Thank you for sharing.

fantacy in practicality said...

a child is born ourt of a mother. when that child reflects his love for her mother in so beautiful way then this becomes the greatest and happiest recognition for her.

the bond was stringed too powerful. loved the tribute:))

Stephen said...

man it touched my heart. beautiful.

Shobha said...

So beautiful...Mother is the best thing in the world..nothing else can be compared to a mother and her unconditional love for her children.

Kriti said...

Absolutely stunning Rigzin! These are the words I would tell my Mom if I were ever able to write like you. Till then its just tight hugs and sloppy kisses on her cheeks : )

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dechen said...

very well written and a perfect tribute to your mother.
keep it up Rigzin.
looking forward for ur next post.

Jan said...

Wow, I loved this so very well expressed of a mother and child's love.

bale rambo said...

a melodious poet of this generation,here paints My fren (rigzin) in the same rhythm of the etenal love bonded between a mom n her child.

Jessica M said...

Simply beautiful. An enjoyable read.

Portia said...

MOTHER!That single word sums up all the universe!I share your feelings,Rigg!
-PORTIA

Shaeeza said...

How beautiful! This is something every mother would love to get from her child.

sparklemezen said...

A beautiful tribute to your mother.

Andy said...

Hello.
I'm visiting from Blogger by Passion.

There is no greater bond than that between a mother and her child. Your poem is a wonderful tribute to your mother.

Thanks so much for sharing.

Perhaps you might like to read one of the many poems I've written for my mom:
Mother...The Flower Of My Life

Tanie said...

its osmly written...I loved it... indeed touchin!!!!!!!!!

The Solitary Writer said...

lovely poem for the mother.Awesome and I loved it to the core. Such poems do make one wonder how intense is the relationship between a mother and a child. So pure and bond is just unbreakable. Love for mother is well expressed in this Ode.

!Ste

Bikramjit said...

Mothers are the best and what a tribute to Mothers ..

thats why they say
Mavaan thandiyaan Chavaan
Chavaan Kaun Kare :)


Bikram's

Simran said...

Very beautiful and touching..

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desert rose said...

splendid!!! Your poems are like showers of the petals of life... so true n deep...
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TayTay said...

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dolma said...

awesome words..mother's love for her kids is the greatest.
a beautiful tribute..a beautiful poem
u got talent.

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Jerly said...

very deep and moving

Mani said...

Rigzz I saw this today, so raw, candid n beautiful :)

Love
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Indrani said...

Very beautiful flow of emotions. Moms are like that!

rinzu rajan said...

The poem is vry pretty especially your feelings that you put in words and the metaphors. Although I wonder why do you sue "ellipsis" unnecessarily? Just out of curiosity I wished to ask!

Dipanwita Chakraborty said...

No one can love anyone as mothers do to their children. Their love is the purest love in this world.

Loved it :)

usha said...

Amazing poem.. Loved it.. Touchy one. Loveable mother and blessed son( you and your mother)