reading her lips is ecstasy for she is
but a mug of romance
beyond this faceless crowd
amidst the din of people
lies the comfort of my solitude
the reason for my literary curiosity
beyond this wall of endless tyranny
lies the pastures of my freedom
the feather to my wings
and flight to my words
beyond this wail of loneliness
lies the warmth of my companion
i cant resist her vapors
as she fumes and calls me..seeking her company
beyond this face of my innocence
lies the reason for the rage of my poems
for she transforms me into a warrior
arming me with words
laced with bows,arrows,spears n cannons
beyond this macabre dance of lies
lies the honesty of her aroma
for she gives ointment to my wounds
and stalks me with her fumes
beyond this enemy lines
and i seek solace in her simmering chest
for she is..my dear ' woman '
' my boiling cup of tea ' ;) :)
42 comments:
Amazing .....u r getting better day by day.....awsm buddy .. keep posting....:) i hope u r filling d diary too...:)
just WOW
imagery u create wid ur words is awesome !!!
Oooolalala...marvellous!
Ur woman is lucky...;)
Love
Mani
Real good
u are speaking about tea as ur woman, thats what I understood
Wonderful.
Wonderful.
your luv for tea is indeed reflected frm ur splendid poem... keep writing n keep havin loads n loads of tea.
This was really very good!
And powerful too.
:)
I enjoyed this, I love the romance of the cup of tea. So vivid I could almost smell the aroma.
I loved this Rigzin! What a unique personification of a cup of tea. I mean who would personify a cup of tea with a woman. She sure sounded sizzling!!!!
Would love your comment on my latest poem
http://rimlybezbaruah.blogspot.in/2012/02/dark-desire.html
you stir a fiery tempest within me with your words! you had me hooked by reading the poetry within your banner...by the time i finished reading "..my dear woman..:-)" i felt a bit weak in the knees!
thank you for sharing your beautiful truth as you do!
Rigzin your words really do come from somewhere within. A place I can't even go to if I were trained. You are a true poet - beautiful!
Beautifully written love the way you play with words.
Jessica Brant
co founder of BlogNostics
Nice one :)
Dear Rigzin,
Your love speaks through each and every line! A wonderful poem!
-Portia
Wooow.. i like previously also told ur sketches talk volumes ..:) ver well written as well..:)
Honesstly speaking i love tea.. big tym addict..:) so loved it evn more..:)
"..beyond dis wall of endless tyranny..
..lies d pastures of my freedom..
..d feather to my wings.."
BEAUTIFUL WORDS!!!
Women in dreams..
if you want your women to stay an angel.. create a heaven for her..
done brilliantly!
Your poem speaks a lot!!! Your love just marvellously put into words....my heart skipped a beat at the end..:) Well done
Then move beyond all of it my friend - your place is on the other side : )
Beautiful imagery of a woman compared to a cup of tea! That was really romantic! :-)
I am a tea drinker too so know how you feel :)
i've some small garden of herbs at home, i use them for baking foods and as herbal medicines.
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Wow this is absolutely wonderfully romantic, I love it...:)
Wow!...This is amazing and so touching...Beautifully penned Rigzin :)
What an amazing peice of writing..Kudos...:)
http://mani-wheniwaslostinme.blogspot.in/2012/05/sunshine-award.html
Award for you rigzz!! :)
Fiery, passionate and playful. You manipulate words beautifully! :-)
http://lyricfire.typepad.com/lyric-fire/2012/05/shades-of-green-and-gray-embracing-challenges-to-become-a-better-artist.html
It was my first to actually have a sit down with your poetry, been seeing it running around...and hey! I missed a lot. Got to catch up. You're pure talent...
Amazing.
Keep it up.
Simply wonderful. Solitude & literary curiosity. You are a terrific poet :) Loved visiting your blog :)
Sizzling hot Rigzin! Your woman truly is lucky to have you and your words in her life : ))
you are extremely awsum rogzin...wow is wat i can onlt say.
Each word exclaims the emotion behind it while the pictures become evidently visible in the canvas. Lovely creation. Well done buddy :)
Beautiful thoughts flowed with perfect words
Surprised with the End!!! What a thought for a cup of tea.. Now I understood why you used to drink that much "teas" up there .. Hehe!! Honestly I wanted to ask you..😛 Anyways liked the personification. Must read twice ( vapour, aroma, fumes) waah!! what a tea ??? Or what a beloved women ??? 😉
Love this. Especially the end
Beautiful 💕🌼
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