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...who is a POET??...he is...but a dethroned king sitting among the ashes of his palace trying to fashion an image out of the ashes...
..he is the poorest of the poor..yet he carries an oasis in his heart cultivated by the caravan of his thinking...he is a pauper..but he still pretends to be a ' prince ' in the kingdom of his vivid imagination..
..he only sings when he is starving for he cannot sing if his mouth be filled with food...
..he only raises his hand to beg for he cannot raise his hands if it be filled with gold...
..his wealth is his winged imagination and fictive power to think...and ' thinking ' always acts for him as the stumbling stone to ' poetry '... :) ;)
..he is a tree watered by the river of beautiful thoughts..and carries in his heart a lamp unconquered by darkness..
..yes..he seeks NIRVANA..not by counting coins of gold..but in leading his sheep to greener pasture..in seeking a smile from humanity...in putting his child to sleep..and in writing the last line of his poem... :)

...he will be unheard until humans honor the dead and forget the living..for then only upon his ' death '... ' he ' will rule their hearts...and his kingdom will have no ending... :) :) ;)
..TO HAVE GREAT POETS..THERE MUST BE GREAT AUDIENCES TOO... :)

Monday, 6 February 2012

my dear woman :) ;)

reading her lips is ecstasy  
for she is
but a mug of romance


beyond this faceless crowd
amidst the din of people
lies the comfort  of my solitude
the reason for my literary curiosity
beyond this wall of endless tyranny
lies the pastures of my freedom
the feather to my wings
and flight to my words
beyond this wail of loneliness
lies the warmth of my companion
i cant resist her vapors
as she fumes and calls me..seeking her company
beyond this face of my innocence
lies the reason for the rage of my poems
for she transforms me into a warrior
arming me with words
laced with bows,arrows,spears n cannons
beyond this macabre dance of lies
lies the honesty of her aroma
for she gives ointment to my wounds
and stalks me with her fumes
beyond this enemy lines
i am surrounded by enemies
and i seek solace in her simmering chest
for she is..my dear  ' woman  '
my boiling cup of tea '  ;)  :)

42 comments:

aman said...

Amazing .....u r getting better day by day.....awsm buddy .. keep posting....:) i hope u r filling d diary too...:)

Jyoti Mishra said...

just WOW
imagery u create wid ur words is awesome !!!

Mani said...

Oooolalala...marvellous!

Ur woman is lucky...;)

Love
Mani

Jerly said...

Real good

Jerly said...

u are speaking about tea as ur woman, thats what I understood

JANU said...

Wonderful.

JANU said...

Wonderful.

desert rose said...

your luv for tea is indeed reflected frm ur splendid poem... keep writing n keep havin loads n loads of tea.

Nas said...

This was really very good!
And powerful too.
:)

Jan said...

I enjoyed this, I love the romance of the cup of tea. So vivid I could almost smell the aroma.

Rimly said...

I loved this Rigzin! What a unique personification of a cup of tea. I mean who would personify a cup of tea with a woman. She sure sounded sizzling!!!!

Would love your comment on my latest poem

http://rimlybezbaruah.blogspot.in/2012/02/dark-desire.html

Dangerous Linda said...

you stir a fiery tempest within me with your words! you had me hooked by reading the poetry within your banner...by the time i finished reading "..my dear woman..:-)" i felt a bit weak in the knees!

thank you for sharing your beautiful truth as you do!

Kriti said...

Rigzin your words really do come from somewhere within. A place I can't even go to if I were trained. You are a true poet - beautiful!

Jessica Brant said...

Beautifully written love the way you play with words.

Jessica Brant
co founder of BlogNostics

Shreya said...

Nice one :)

PORTIA said...

Dear Rigzin,
Your love speaks through each and every line! A wonderful poem!
-Portia

Ankitha said...

Wooow.. i like previously also told ur sketches talk volumes ..:) ver well written as well..:)

Ankitha said...

Honesstly speaking i love tea.. big tym addict..:) so loved it evn more..:)

Farfalla Dreams said...

"..beyond dis wall of endless tyranny..
..lies d pastures of my freedom..
..d feather to my wings.."

BEAUTIFUL WORDS!!!

Deepika said...

Women in dreams..
if you want your women to stay an angel.. create a heaven for her..
done brilliantly!

Anonymous said...

Your poem speaks a lot!!! Your love just marvellously put into words....my heart skipped a beat at the end..:) Well done

Kriti said...

Then move beyond all of it my friend - your place is on the other side : )

Irene @ Inspiration From The Little Things said...

Beautiful imagery of a woman compared to a cup of tea! That was really romantic! :-)

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sulekkha said...

I am a tea drinker too so know how you feel :)

Anonymous said...

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Jan said...

Wow this is absolutely wonderfully romantic, I love it...:)

☂☆ Vållῐ ★♬ said...

Wow!...This is amazing and so touching...Beautifully penned Rigzin :)

Tanie said...

What an amazing peice of writing..Kudos...:)

Mani said...

http://mani-wheniwaslostinme.blogspot.in/2012/05/sunshine-award.html

Award for you rigzz!! :)

Tameka said...

Fiery, passionate and playful. You manipulate words beautifully! :-)

http://lyricfire.typepad.com/lyric-fire/2012/05/shades-of-green-and-gray-embracing-challenges-to-become-a-better-artist.html

FherYmas said...

It was my first to actually have a sit down with your poetry, been seeing it running around...and hey! I missed a lot. Got to catch up. You're pure talent...
Amazing.
Keep it up.

Tanya Sehgal said...

Simply wonderful. Solitude & literary curiosity. You are a terrific poet :) Loved visiting your blog :)

Kriti said...

Sizzling hot Rigzin! Your woman truly is lucky to have you and your words in her life : ))

Surbhi Mishra said...

you are extremely awsum rogzin...wow is wat i can onlt say.

Sayantini Bhattacharya said...

Each word exclaims the emotion behind it while the pictures become evidently visible in the canvas. Lovely creation. Well done buddy :)

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Noryang said...

Beautiful thoughts flowed with perfect words

usha said...

Surprised with the End!!! What a thought for a cup of tea.. Now I understood why you used to drink that much "teas" up there .. Hehe!! Honestly I wanted to ask you..😛 Anyways liked the personification. Must read twice ( vapour, aroma, fumes) waah!! what a tea ??? Or what a beloved women ??? 😉

Toshi J said...

Love this. Especially the end

Wiradjuri Dreaming said...

Beautiful 💕🌼