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...who is a POET??...he is...but a dethroned king sitting among the ashes of his palace trying to fashion an image out of the ashes...
..he is the poorest of the poor..yet he carries an oasis in his heart cultivated by the caravan of his thinking...he is a pauper..but he still pretends to be a ' prince ' in the kingdom of his vivid imagination..
..he only sings when he is starving for he cannot sing if his mouth be filled with food...
..he only raises his hand to beg for he cannot raise his hands if it be filled with gold...
..his wealth is his winged imagination and fictive power to think...and ' thinking ' always acts for him as the stumbling stone to ' poetry '... :) ;)
..he is a tree watered by the river of beautiful thoughts..and carries in his heart a lamp unconquered by darkness..
..yes..he seeks NIRVANA..not by counting coins of gold..but in leading his sheep to greener pasture..in seeking a smile from humanity...in putting his child to sleep..and in writing the last line of his poem... :)

...he will be unheard until humans honor the dead and forget the living..for then only upon his ' death '... ' he ' will rule their hearts...and his kingdom will have no ending... :) :) ;)
..TO HAVE GREAT POETS..THERE MUST BE GREAT AUDIENCES TOO... :)

Saturday, 29 September 2012

poetry left me :( :(


pack up the moon
dismantle the sun
pour away the ocean
sweep away the wood
for nothing now 
can ever 
come to any good
                      

poetry left me
left me in all forms
verse,couplets and meter
escaped me
hidden in metaphor and similes
words no longer stir me
but die a hundred deaths
choking my parched veins
I no longer see words
dripping like hot lava
setting forest fires
cascading your wild hair
I am not the horse of wind
galloping high up in the skies
carrying messages to the moon..
dwelling your magical eyes.
nor am I the singing bird
collecting twigs of alphabets
weaving limericks nestled
in every fabric of your eyebrows
Gibran ,Hafez ,Rumi,Qabbani!!
what use is their sorcery
do you now picture my disease
a wanderer disrobed of language
allow me to pluck words
from the garden of your beauty
again lend wings to my bardic existence
baptize me with that one ' rare event '
your ' beautiful face '  :( 

89 comments:

Ron said...

A stirring verse indeed! Absence and change can suck the breath from us. Being emotionally "winded" is...or can be a steep vertical obstacle to traverse.

Very deep and well done.

Be well,
Ron

sandra tyler said...

as writers we all indeed can get winded.

Jerly said...

WOW! poetry has definitely not left u It has come to u in more power and ease that u don't recognise its presence!It is sorrow and separation that stirs the poetry of our souls. Reminds me that my first poem on blog was one of sorrowful philosophising! HaHa http://jerlyt.blogspot.in/2008/10/moving-on.html
This poem is now my favourite among all ur poems that I have read so far. Wonderful flow and charm and very moving!

irene @ inspiration.from.the.little.things said...

No, it did not leave you, my friend. Maybe you just needed a break to get some inspiration and you'll feel more rejuvenated and creative when you return.

Excellent post here. Your words define your emotions so well. :-)

Kriti said...

After what I just read dear Rigzin, it's mighty difficult to believe that poetry and you are separable! Those amazing lines are you and you seem to be those lines - its difficult even to figure our where one ends and the other begins! Kudos dear friend!

FherYmas said...

The irony is...you are poetry.

Excellent!!!

Fher

JANU said...

This is really beautifully...if this is the loss of words, imagine what you can do with words!!!!

Mani said...

Rigz, u know u r one f my fav among the writers in blogging not only coz f ur amazing poetry but also coz f d honesty in that poetry which is an intrinsic part f ur persona, it reflects in ur poetry...yes this happens...we feel empty sometimes...as though our creativity has left us. We are obsessed...n look how the creativity has bounced back.

Brilliant! N I loved what Fher said about u...aah u r the poetry ;)

Love
Mani

Jyoti Mishra said...

after reading this no one can say it left you...
it is there my friend... and once its there it never dies :)

Rimly Bezbarua said...

Wow! Your words took my breath away. I often feel like poetry has left me but even if I wanted to I could not express it as beautifully as you, Rigzin. Love can put you into tangles but I am sure your beautiful poetry will flow like a clear and lucid stream. Loved it!

mingure said...


though my comment pales in front of ur brilliant poetry, i couldn't resist myself.
another brilliant poem by my frnd...creativity never dies , it is always der, buried somewhere within n u have fantastically unfolded it !!!
brilliant!!!

Dangerous Linda said...

Dear Rigzin,

Gorgeous and ironic. On the one hand you perfectly captured what it feels like when I can't find the words and I think I'll never write again. Ironically, you did it with your powerful use of words.

I shall save this to inspire me when I need it! Thank you for sharing! XOXOX

Faye Balatbat said...

Poetry didn't left you. :) I think poetry and you are one. Nice post!! :)

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touched ...nice

banalpunk said...

great writing bro...i felt it..

Dave M. Saha said...

I can say one thing: poetry has definitely not left you. I'm going to repeat what one of my friends said to me, you write what calls to you. And you write when you have the muse. It's okay if you don't really feel like writing at the moment (not sure if that's the case!). Take your time. Your poetry is pretty great anyway, though. ;-)

Tanya Sehgal said...

Such a lovely poem with every essence of poetry at it's best :) Why are you creating an outrage by filing such a title... Such is sarcasm LOl!
Take care friend

Kim, USA said...

Awesome poem! Thanks for the vsiit.

Kim,USA

Anonymous said...

tremendous issues here. I?

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Cathy Tittle said...

I enjoyed the cadence of your poem. The emphasis on certain words added a visual quality that was pleasing as well.

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PORTIA said...

How can poetry ever leave you, my dear poet?
-Portia

Tameka said...

This was beautiful. I'm sure poetry is soon to return.

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Powerful lines. Well written :)

Bikramjit said...

why so sad


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Sri Valli said...

It is just a phase!
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