like a great poet
the mountain knows
how to produce the greatest effects
with the most limited means
so here i am amidst the mountains..
just the mountains and me..
for its grandeur like a potent wine...
for its grandeur like a potent wine...
flows through every rock,every pebble ..
and through every grain of sand..
the mountains gaze at me like a king..
as if to narrate me an ancient epic..
and through every grain of sand..
the mountains gaze at me like a king..
as if to narrate me an ancient epic..
the epic of the faded kings of this virgin land..
that stands buried between ancient days and now..
the clouds drift lazily between earth and heaven..
searching for perch at the top of the mountains..
the eagle pierces the sky in the distance..
the clouds drift lazily between earth and heaven..
searching for perch at the top of the mountains..
the eagle pierces the sky in the distance..
breaking the circle of the earth and the skies..
preying its eyes on a lamb among the flock..
the shepherd keeps its flock veiled..
the shepherd keeps its flock veiled..
by the threat of its loaded sling..
the river is now happy with summer..
for it roars and growls..kissing the foothill..
for it roars and growls..kissing the foothill..
meandering away from the chaos of this world..
lashing on ferociously on the weak wooden bridge..
the powerful cool winds keep howling..
the powerful cool winds keep howling..
the towering trees gyrating..
as if welcoming the winds..
the leaves keep rustling and whistling..
conveying me..the secret message of the mountains..
the birds are chirping..
welcoming..this onslaught of summer..
still its so quiet here..
no one to speak to..
just the mountains and me..
for between us..we have forgotten the world..
still its so quiet here..
no one to speak to..
just the mountains and me..
for between us..we have forgotten the world..
and i no longer feel like a human..
but a hermit living alone in this abode..
dazzled by nature's ethereal scheme..
and the fury of its beauty that slaughters.. :) ;)
: this poem I wrote during my stay in Ladakh last summers.. :)
and the fury of its beauty that slaughters.. :) ;)
: this poem I wrote during my stay in Ladakh last summers.. :)
40 comments:
O! Rigz what a beautiful poetry which touched so many levels.
Just beatiful and brilliant!
I loved d pics of ur town Rigz...I wish n pray I too get to see this beauty someday.
Blessings!
Love
Mani
O! Rigz what a beautiful poetry which touched so many levels.
Just beatiful and brilliant!
I loved d pics of ur town Rigz...I wish n pray I too get to see this beauty someday.
Blessings!
Love
Mani
O! Rigz what a beautiful poetry which touched so many levels.
Just beatiful and brilliant!
I loved d pics of ur town Rigz...I wish n pray I too get to see this beauty someday.
Blessings!
Love
Mani
O! Rigz what a beautiful poetry which touched so many levels.
Just beatiful and brilliant!
I loved d pics of ur town Rigz...I wish n pray I too get to see this beauty someday.
Blessings!
Love
Mani
Hello.
It's nice to get away from the stresses of life sometimes and be. Nice post! Thanks for sharing.
Thoughts Of Beauty In The Stillness Of Dawn...
d mountains and me...
loved that...
sometimes such solace u get in isolation :)
n the natural beauty is beyond words..
expressions... lovely :)
Heya other than the love for men, women and for that matter tea in case :P love for nature is the most magical and awesome experience and if the place is "Ladakh" then you are in the world's best place.Your poem took me on a tour to my homeland.Thanx:)
Keep writing!!
Yeh! You've just helped me experience a mountain feeling once again.
Beautiful.
Wow....Beautiful poem with lot of beautiful feelings....I can see the beauty of nature through your words...Nicely penned...
Loved it! It had beautiful and powerful imagery in it. I love being out in nature...a beautiful place to reflect and just be.
powerful as a 'potent wine'(to use your own beautiful words)! I liked this poem very much. Thank you, dear, for sharing it with us!
-Portia
Nature has the power to make us connect to our spirit and forget our little self. beautifully captured
Absolutely stunning Rigzin - You really do have a poets' heart...
stay Vigil n alert.... da mountains might pass you out....
thy say u r in Ladakh... njoy da air while u can still breathe da freshness!!!
i like ur poem very much,,,,its a very beautiful poem,,,keep it up bro,,,
i really love the poem because through d poem one carves his own feelings about nature!!!!
wonderful poem. reminded me of the time I went trekking in Manali.
A powerful poem. Loved the imagery!
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We have a World literature Subject. We are now tackling about the good, the truth and the beautiful. I think the way you write can be known in that category. I wonder why we didn't tackle your country's lit. Seems like there are interesting things to learn from your lit.
Another beautiful piece... u have aptly captured d beauty in ur words...i feel like visiting Ladakh again...:)...good job!!
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d river is now happy with summer..
loved that line..
nice post..!
al the poetry was flowing in a flow..:)
Absolutely enthralling! You are a poet in the true sense of the term. You have the heart of a poet! Enjoyed this very much!
The mountains truly surrounded me as I read this lovely poem. Thanks for transporting me to such a beautiful place. :-)
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Indeed, it's like an ointment to my restless soul... Thank you for sharing Rigzin..:)
---Jorie Pacli
wow..simply superb!
I loved how you described the mountains. You felt it and stayed with it ~ it certainly creates an impact. It's almost like reaching heaven and being nearer to God.
I know I shouldn't be technical in commenting, but I do not understand the shortened forms of the words...
first time here and after seeing couple of my blogger friends feeling like home....
BTW very well penned thoughts...enjoyed the read.
Beautifully portrayed. Loved the intensity :)
Dear Rigzin
wow, such insight into spirituality, for being so young but so wise beyond your years
I really enjoyed reading this poem, you took me on a dream in nature, I did not want to wake up, you poetry is so out of this world, such a blessing to have the gift
Truly
Paul
Leaking Pen
beautiful!!!!! and i can say this word 50 times for the poem...nature and its powers...amazing poem..:)
Beautiful beyond words. :)
No wonder this poem talks about the only (leh Ladhak) While reading Itself I could actually feel the breath of the mountain and the blue blue sky.. You belong to that wonderland.. Beautifully written.. Course no wonder you can pen the fury of its beauty which may slaughter..
Beautiful poem.Great words.For the readers ,it shows the perfect image of ladakh in summer.
The mountains speak in silent tones with the king.Beauty never escapes the eye...
Beautiful portrait of mountain-life. It is both charming and challenging!
-Portia
The poetic lines are as mesmerizing as the picture... :-)
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